I like how you've presented your 25 word pitch; it is eye-catching and encourages people to go and buy your magazine. Personally, I'd pay £2.50-£3.50 for your magazine. The reason for that is this particular type of genre holds a large place in the market already. To improve, I'd recommend you to make the slides shorter as they are currently too long.
Nat! Your pitch has been created in a clear and unique way. It seems that you have a clear in indication about what you will be creating, I like the examples that you have found as they are all different and unique from magazines that have are being published today. I would pay £3.50. From looking around your blog I feel that using a female model would not be as effective because of the different interests that myself (the reader) and the magazine would share.
Nat, I think that your pitch is okay, there are a few things which I like such as how you have targeted a specific type of audience, I also like how you have used a lot of magazine examples in your pitch and how your have clearly spent a lot of time on your coursework. On the contrary, I feel that there are already magazine which have the same genre of you, such as iD and Wonderland. For this reason I would not pay more than £2.50 as I would rather spend it on a magazine with a bigger reputation. To solve this I feel like you may have to include some stuff from a different type of genre, in order to widen your audience range. Finally, i feel that on the pitch some of the slides are too long therefore you should make them shorter, I also think it would be better if the last slide was not there as if the pitch just faded out.
The pitch you have created is clear, unique and creative. The use of other magazine examples is great and your magazine plan is really clear. I would pay £3.50 for your magazine. I feel that minor details need to be included to make this pitch perfect.
I like the way you have presented your 25 word pitch. The use of images and colour lets me know who your target audience is straight away. The images you have chosen are very girly, so I am expecting you to hit your target genre effectively. You have high expectations I can infer from the words you have used so I am interested to see what you magazine will turn out like. I would pay £3.00 for your magazine. To improve, consider using images or some musical artists. This will draw your target audience in more.
i like how you've made everything clear throughout the pitch by using words and images, i would pay about £3.50 for your magazine as it appeals to me, to improve you could use another colour other than the deep purple just to make it more interesting, if you know your colour palette you could include that throughout as a theme.
I like how your pitch is very clear and understanding, you know exactly how and what your target market likes in regards to your chosen genre. Also, the photos link very well with your chosen words. I would pay £3.50 for your magazine. To improve, make your pitch a bit shorter and snappier to keep the attention of whoever is watching.
I like how you've presented your 25 word pitch; it is eye-catching and encourages people to go and buy your magazine. Personally, I'd pay £2.50-£3.50 for your magazine. The reason for that is this particular type of genre holds a large place in the market already. To improve, I'd recommend you to make the slides shorter as they are currently too long.
ReplyDeleteNat! Your pitch has been created in a clear and unique way. It seems that you have a clear in indication about what you will be creating, I like the examples that you have found as they are all different and unique from magazines that have are being published today.
ReplyDeleteI would pay £3.50.
From looking around your blog I feel that using a female model would not be as effective because of the different interests that myself (the reader) and the magazine would share.
Nat, I think that your pitch is okay, there are a few things which I like such as how you have targeted a specific type of audience, I also like how you have used a lot of magazine examples in your pitch and how your have clearly spent a lot of time on your coursework. On the contrary, I feel that there are already magazine which have the same genre of you, such as iD and Wonderland. For this reason I would not pay more than £2.50 as I would rather spend it on a magazine with a bigger reputation. To solve this I feel like you may have to include some stuff from a different type of genre, in order to widen your audience range. Finally, i feel that on the pitch some of the slides are too long therefore you should make them shorter, I also think it would be better if the last slide was not there as if the pitch just faded out.
ReplyDeleteThe pitch you have created is clear, unique and creative. The use of other magazine examples is great and your magazine plan is really clear.
ReplyDeleteI would pay £3.50 for your magazine.
I feel that minor details need to be included to make this pitch perfect.
I like the way you have presented your 25 word pitch. The use of images and colour lets me know who your target audience is straight away. The images you have chosen are very girly, so I am expecting you to hit your target genre effectively. You have high expectations I can infer from the words you have used so I am interested to see what you magazine will turn out like.
ReplyDeleteI would pay £3.00 for your magazine.
To improve, consider using images or some musical artists. This will draw your target audience in more.
i like how you've made everything clear throughout the pitch by using words and images, i would pay about £3.50 for your magazine as it appeals to me, to improve you could use another colour other than the deep purple just to make it more interesting, if you know your colour palette you could include that throughout as a theme.
ReplyDeleteI like how your pitch is very clear and understanding, you know exactly how and what your target market likes in regards to your chosen genre. Also, the photos link very well with your chosen words. I would pay £3.50 for your magazine. To improve, make your pitch a bit shorter and snappier to keep the attention of whoever is watching.
ReplyDelete